Feedback:
From the responses it is clear that my masthead does not fit in with my magazine because of the colour it is. For the front page the coverline is grabbing which is good, the photograph is also good on this page. Although it could do with more coverlines. For the contents the colour and the layout is a strength that it has however both images could be better. For my double page spread the photo is good and the colours are constant but the text is hard to read and the font used is slightly childish.
I got feedback from the client:
From this feedback it's clear that my front cover is good because of the masthead and photo but the colours are not the same as my contents and DPS so it doesn't create a brand like it should and it really needs to for the first issue. Also my grammar and spelling in my body copy is very bad and needs to be fixed.
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